Second Planning Attempt

So, I wasn't digging my initial attempt with the wall collision much and after discussing it a bit with our mentor, I thought perhaps I should "go back to basics" and eliminate the wall thing altogether at first.  Lock it down without it first, then toy with that afterward if there's time.

At any rate, here's the thumbs for this one:

And here's the initial blocking:

I'm thinking my "hang time" may be a little too long on most of those bounces, particularly the first and second one....but I've been staring at this too long and it could just be my eye.  Would love to hear what others think if you feel so inclined.