This one ain't bad, I guess. I posed this way myself and it didn't feel "unnatural", which was my concern.
This one felt more natural(supposed to have his thumb hooked in his non-existent pocket), but I don't think it reads as nicely as the other one.
I think the bottom one with hand in "pocket" is better. It feels like he is more worn out and not able to keep his hand up like in the first pic.
ReplyDeleteOne thought (since people have been pointing this out for me) is you might consider exaggerated the pose a little more to get a stronger line of action. in this case, moving his hips to the left and/or the shoulders to the right a little more to make a more definitive 'C' shape with his torso which is flowing down the neck.
Looking good. It is kind of interesting seeing your shot with no props. I like it.
I can get behind that(about the hand in pocket pose looking more "worn out).
ReplyDeleteThink I'll try and push that one further and see how it turns out.